How can I further improve my work?

I have posted my work twice in here before and got some really helpful advice

I’d like to know what else I can improve on in my work or if there’s anything I’ve missed out on that could get my work more marks

The pictures attached are my work after I made attempts to improve (you can find my previous posts for my prior work)

These are 3 artist research artwork analysis and response pages

I am currently in year 10 art GCSE

Thanks for reading